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ViciousHandler
ViciousHandlerLv53yrViciousHandler

Starts out good but gets very passive and lame as story progress. MC personality is very beta and very passive. Hes a goodie two shoe complex. what bugs me is is attitude towards the death eaters, the Dursley and Ron the Weasel. Death Eaters : MC is OP enough to kill them but adopts an attitude of wait for the fight that the bad guy will bring instead of hunting them and killing them one by one. Instead he tries to train others to fight the death eater while stating how much he hates them and blaly bla bla.... The Dursley: MC supposedly has a passive attitude/mentality that says gives bad people a second chance (school bullies, ***** wizards -death eaters) but when he shows up to the Dursley he loses it and and acts like a tyrant. This scene makes me feel like MC is bias or is prejudice towards muggles cause he doesnt even give them the friendly warning like how he does with withches/wizards. Even though author wrote him going off his rock was because of his magical animal side take over - Still does not excuse!! Ron the Weasel : We all know Ron is a twat! Author tries to make excuse that he wants to give Ron the second chance and benefit of the doubts. In authors novel he straight up makes Ron a twat. Ron goes off shooting his mouth and does offensive/retarted thing but MC just brush it off saying "oh he is still young and still teachable to change". While this happens over and over. Author is basically a Ron lover and give him free pass just cause he is Harrys side kick. Over all 3 stars, could be better. Perfer the other Alexander harry potter novel. this one is too passive with Beta complex.

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Nigga_Lzz
Nigga_LzzLv13Nigga_Lzz

I agree I got to chapter 18 and I knew I wasn't probably going to keep reading after he said he will just give Dumbledore and oath just to leave him alone

Holy_Sheep
Holy_SheepLv13Holy_Sheep

do you have any really good harry potter fan fics you'd like to recommend?

MikhailUno
MikhailUnoLv1MikhailUno

I have one, HP: Blood of the dragon. You don't really need to read the prequel(?), GUIM made by MisterImmortal but it will give you some context on what happens in the novel,

Holy_Sheep:do you have any really good harry potter fan fics you'd like to recommend?
Oscar_Tam
Oscar_TamLv3Oscar_Tam

Ugh another Dumbledore i couldn't stand the first one let alone the second one