Review Detail of hhhhz45 in HPRP (New Chapters in fanfic section version)

Are you perhaps describing your review?

Dude if ur going to be a nuance, twat and a c unt go fu ck off to ur little b itch corner instead of reviewing something like this.

If you're going to write a review, at least give constructive criticism and point out WHAT it is that is incorrect, instead of just dumping a bad review without explaining WHY.