Review Detail of RJMidnight in Sunset

The storyline is good and so ot the writing style. The main problem is grammar, you rarely use capitalization on the areas that need it, especially on names and start of sentences. Then you keep stating that Aelex is gay, you already said it once, there is no need to repeat it because the reader already knows. Other than that the story is good and I like the MC (although female lead stories and romance is not my thing).