The plot is really interesting and it's something completely new for me. The more you will read the more it will pull you in the plot. The pace of the story is perfect and I have a feeling that each character has a story of their own. The grammar is a little rough but it doesn't impact the story very badly. I'll suggest you to run your chapters through Grammarly, it will be a great help. I'm actually looking forward to the next update because I wanna know what the Ice Stupid will do since he got a rival....haha! :)
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