Review Detail of BabyQQ in A Fallen Knight-Lost art of necromancy

hello.. I've read up to chapters 51 and decided to give some reviews. . the book have decent story but there are a lot of talk and information. there is no explanation about who is talking and who is answering between the talk, sometimes 1 person talk a lot with using just this (" ") that sometimes confused me like he talk and response just by himself ,.. the main reason im here because the title. but not a lot of action until chapters 51 that I've read, only the world building that take a lot of time and chapters that I've decided to dropped this