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Author here! Hello guys this is my first story on this platform. You may find some grammer mistakes here and there, but I ensure you about the quality of the story. Now for the story, Those of you unable to figure out the background despite cover and synopsis let me tell you it is Mahabharata. I am using the elements of Mahabharata to create my own story, This story is written from the figment of my imagination. There will be inclusion of the Mahabharata Characters to develop the character of MC. But no major changes would be made to the story of Mahabharata. The story isn't about how pandavas won the war or how they adventured in their journey. The entire story would be focused on Rudra with some small interactions with the pandavas here and there. No major inculsion with the Pandavas until the War of Mahabharata. So, sorry to disappoint seeking the story of Mahabharata. My novel though will built the world based on the Indian mythology with rich elements of all kinds of powers and beings included from other epics including Mahabharata. The MC has a single aim to rise above all to eradicate the discrimination of Sudra. That's all! Thank you everyone who read my story. If you have any questions regarding the plot be free to comment or you can reply to this review to know.

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The Legend of Rudra

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I know it is only fiction but you should at least know there was no such thing as varnas by birth... There is no such mention in vedas, varnas were interchangeable. It is only in Manusmriti that this is mentioned, which is basically a smriti(opinion of individuals). That too was heavily edited over the time....... You are literally propogating wrong info.... Anyway, all the best in your writing !!!

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author said " I am using the elements of Mahabharata to create my own story, This story is written from the figment of my imagination."

Asdfgh:I know it is only fiction but you should at least know there was no such thing as varnas by birth... There is no such mention in vedas, varnas were interchangeable. It is only in Manusmriti that this is mentioned, which is basically a smriti(opinion of individuals). That too was heavily edited over the time....... You are literally propogating wrong info.... Anyway, all the best in your writing !!!
DaoistM0BeY0
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In this Novel you make the main character an excellent mace fighter, and in this and you must bring some incidents such as Lakshagriha incident, tournament of Arms, Draupadis Swayamvara, building Indraprastha, killing Jarasandha, Rajasuya yagna etc.