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2023-11-14 03:54

Just a few points- in the time of Mahabharata , if you manages to impress people, you could get someone to teach you to fight even if you were not born to warriors. And it was not a time when sudras etc were thought less off. It was only karna who thought being mere charioteers was not cool enough and wanted better. People forget that his charioteer was a king. And arjuna’s was Krishna. On that note, people were not discriminated against based on skin colour . That happens now because of Hollywood and beauty cream adds. Krishna was supposed to be dark as the night sky- a very deep and dark blue- not fair. Which was why he was nicknamed syamala Krishna- the dark one

The Legend of Rudra

ForgottenLife
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ForgottenLife
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Author here! Hello guys this is my first story on this platform. You may find some grammer mistakes here and there, but I ensure you about the quality of the story. Now for the story, Those of you unable to figure out the background despite cover and synopsis let me tell you it is Mahabharata. I am using the elements of Mahabharata to create my own story, This story is written from the figment of my imagination. There will be inclusion of the Mahabharata Characters to develop the character of MC. But no major changes would be made to the story of Mahabharata. The story isn't about how pandavas won the war or how they adventured in their journey. The entire story would be focused on Rudra with some small interactions with the pandavas here and there. No major inculsion with the Pandavas until the War of Mahabharata. So, sorry to disappoint seeking the story of Mahabharata. My novel though will built the world based on the Indian mythology with rich elements of all kinds of powers and beings included from other epics including Mahabharata. The MC has a single aim to rise above all to eradicate the discrimination of Sudra. That's all! Thank you everyone who read my story. If you have any questions regarding the plot be free to comment or you can reply to this review to know.

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Asutosh_Behera_7510
Asutosh_Behera_7510Lv1

Great picturesque of Indian mythology and it's warriors. Good detailing, like the use of chakra to heal, blood and battlefield. The reader finds himself in the world of Rudra with this kind of imagination. Good work

4yr
Miss_Justice
Miss_JusticeLv3

This novel is the most amazing novel that I have read so far! I was really looking for a novel that could bring me to the sky just by his words and sentences, but now I had found it! I love the novel! And I'm itching for more chapters! I want more chapters!!!

4yr
demonofmadness
demonofmadnessLv3

It is a great read. The characters the world and plotline are inspired from the mahabharat but it has a life of its own. Would recommend to the readers out there

4yr
SomethingLikeDeSun
SomethingLikeDeSunLv2

Hey, this was really good to read. The story is written smoothly, I've never read a story based in an Indian magical world so this was really awesome, looking forward to your next update.

4yr
BLOOPINGBLOOPER
BLOOPINGBLOOPERLv1

I really love how you implemented Indian culture into the story. It's so cool and refreshing to see a plotline going on in an indian inspired world. Good job.

4yr
winterdaisy55
winterdaisy55Lv3

The Author has a great understanding of the world inside, and the story is written very smoothly. I am not a big fan of history novel as i think it's pretty boring, but surprisingly, as i read your work, i find my self to be pretty immersed in it. Great job!

4yr
1234_asdfqwer
1234_asdfqwerLv3

Great story . rekindled my interest in the legend s and epics of Mahabharata............... ,............................................................................................

4yr
Drapetomaniac12
Drapetomaniac12Lv4

Being an Indian myself, it felt really cool to read a book based on Mahabharata. The author has done an incredible job with the main character. I would like to see how the story progresses in the future.

4yr
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