Review Detail of NebulousArcana in The Uchiha's in MHA 11111 (Has been moved)

Probably this fic's first actual review but whatever. Let's just do bullet points and knock this out. • OC and his lack of a personality • Background Characters aren't Characters • Not really adding anything to the world to make it unique • Lack of descriptive writing • Waste of potential - This rendition of the character doesn't exactly excite me to any degree and I've seen just about every one of his potential fights played out in other crappy fan-fics. His ego seems a tad bit more leveled than Bakou-b*tch's but thats only because he has a hype man that follows him around in every chapter doing the boasting for him. - Since Enjiro is the only 'person' besides the OC that you'll often see it's kinda sad that you got his character completely wrong, first off he dyes his hair red (naturally black), I don't remember him having any prior combat experiance before U.A and if he did it would be boxing. While he does respect strength and "manliness" it wouldn't be to fanatic levels of lunacy shown. Brief mentions; Aisawa wouldn't let the OC be a popus little sh*t and would knock him down a peg as early as entering the classroom, season 1 Bakou-b*tch would've leaped over people in danger to punch the OC in their first 'interaction' - Not really anything inherently different to set this MHA universe apart from the rest except another Madara Uchiha that still manages to fail miserably at being as cool as OG Madara even with all his powers. - Only the OC and Kirishima have actually gotten any physical descriptions (Note: I stopped reading at the 3rd to last chapter so it's possible someone or something was 'lucky' enough to have their eyes, hair or structure defined) - I've read a few Madara fan-fics and this one doesn't even make the top 50 list, the guy is just boring, he mentioned wasting his natrually born gift in his first life then manages to do it again in his second. And really there isn't an excuse for that type of fuckery other than letting readers know that yes he's stronger than All Might but other than raw fighting potential the guy isn't really cut out to be a hero. He doesn't have the charisma, drive nor values to be a proper hero so why is he at U.A? It's just a damn shame because if you could write someone compelling with those same abilities that actually trained to master them instead of a douchè bag with an 'that was easy button' being a hero just because he 'can' my review would be completely different. Just bring back Mineta atleast that perverted midget had goals (though holes they may be, actual goals all the same.)