Review Detail of TahsinHossain in Lotus and the Demon

I personally liked this story, despite its flaws. It didn't have any major grammatical mistakes, that's for sure! But in some lines, the author should really add some coma(,) or dots (...) to make the conversation seem more realistic. Another thing that bugged me was the sudden personality change of the characters (ex. from angry to caring and all that), maybe add a few monologues of the characters in between the changes to make them seem more probable. Another thing, we didn't really get much insight into the background. I have read a fair number of chapters, but still, the background of the world was confusing. Maybe the author doesn't really need to add text walls full of boring descriptions to build the world. Just expressing little hints here and there in the form of dialogues would work. Other than that, it's a fairly entertaining story (even though I don't usually read stories with female leads), and I'd recommend it to those who love to read stories that gradually create romantic relationships between the main leads, rather than making them fall in love from the bat.