It has good plot and no plot holes which is nice. And also it's consistent in its world build-up. It's good with character development too. I only have a few complains: 1. Grammar needs improvement. Punctuation is important. 2. Too fast. The plot moves super fast and sometimes it's confusing. And it's even more confusing when one character has like, 3 names. That's it. besides this, it's a great read.
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