Review Detail of N0_Hope in Dragon Ball H, Greater Days +18
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Writing Quality : 1/5 Stability of Updates : 1/5 Story Development :2/5 Character Design : 2/5 World Background : 3/5 Even if there is a harem tagg when an author removes/never creates the +18 scenes this only makes it worse. And the way the MC talks..... not only does he talk like sht but he sometimes adds some cultivation words that makes you want to vomit... also allowing C18 to be with Krillin is a sin if you are looking for a good harem.... Krillin never deserved her. Anyway, this fic has a really low quality on every aspect of it.
Dragon Ball H, Greater Days +18
RollenMajor
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Okay, where in the story did he primarily do anything like that of cultivating? Also meditation exist in dragonball and it’s a form of training
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I could accept to a certain point the low quality speach that the MC uses as a way to express and I could even accept a very disgusting cultivation word once in a " while " ( once every 10 caps =1 sentence is still ok ) but what I can't accept is that a fan of dragon ball would gladly allow C18 to be fked by a looser such as Krillin . It's like accepting that Ron Wisley and Hermione are ok as a couple... it' not fking ok , it's disgusitng .
RollenMajor:It’s not for everyone. Sorry it you didn’t enjoy it
Sounds like you are reviewing from a subjective standpoint than an objective standpoint which I understand but this “Low quality” speech is because of where he grew up. And the cultivation talk is just him talking about actual martial arts that are REAL and the 18 thing. It’s an oh well for you type beat
N0_Hope:I could accept to a certain point the low quality speach that the MC uses as a way to express and I could even accept a very disgusting cultivation word once in a " while " ( once every 10 caps =1 sentence is still ok ) but what I can't accept is that a fan of dragon ball would gladly allow C18 to be fked by a looser such as Krillin . It's like accepting that Ron Wisley and Hermione are ok as a couple... it' not fking ok , it's disgusitng .