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HARSHA_JOSEPH
HARSHA_JOSEPHLv23yr
2021-06-09 17:59

It's a killer story to begin with.I love the way it unfolds It begins simple and later it's like building up and up like a building rising from the basement.It won't bore anyone who reads for sure.❤️

the lion and the tulip

Chinnu_002
4.8
17 Chs

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Chinnu_002
Chinnu_002Author

thank you ,that's really motivating❤️

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CtrlAltKnight
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The authors really know how to use the concept of "Showing and not telling" which is a very positive sign for me. Though its a goody, there's still a big untapped potential here especially if the author wants to get a contract. It can still improve further to the next level. Thus, I kindly suggest this improvement -Grammar improvement - I encourage using grammarly in your work. I believe you can take it to the next level. Wishing for the Best and Keep it up![img=recommend]

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KenRingdomstory
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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Harsha_Kj
Harsha_KjLv2

The story is one of a kind and I am in love with the writing.Its very detailed.I can imagine the battle field when I read these lines.The characters are special for me.Its definitely one of the best books I have read in here.

3yr
zd4zali
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

4yr
iam_adh
iam_adhLv2

I like this story, it's very interesting I like the concepts of it. I believe this has immense potential, however, for it to reach its highest point I suggest that the grammar be worked on it. It's a little hard for me to enjoy the story because I noticed many grammatical errors. Besides that though, its still a good story I love the way how the author shows things instead of telling us, I really like. If only comics did that... Any, I wish the author the best of luck!

4yr
SnowPenguin
SnowPenguinLv3

The descriptions are amazing, and the use of the setting in the story and characters is really well done to give this celestial, mysterious kind of atmosphere in the work.

4yr
Kirbyisgreen
KirbyisgreenLv4

Good start. Keep going at it young author! Keep writing and updating, Try to write 1000 words per day. Doesn't matter what you write, it doesn't have to be a good chapter. Just write whatever comes to your mind and you can always edit it out later.

4yr
Shionokami
ShionokamiLv1

This was a good read overall, great story, great concept and good characters, the only problem is the few grammar mistakes (Like I always say it's not a problem, and dosen't hinder a good story and can be fixed with ease) other than that it's a really good story, so keep it up, Author!

4yr
Mill_01
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