Review Detail of KoryuHotshot in The Bloody Emissary of Justice

Look Author, your idea is great nice how it goes, some misspelling but nothing great to Hurt it. The worst you do are 2 things that if you fix you should really makes it a better work. First: CHILDREN ARE REALLY REALLY STUPID THEY DO NOT THINK LIKE ADULTS DONT BLUSH AND THEY ONLY THINK POOP OR SOMETHING!😁 Second: DO YOU HAVE A GOLDFISH'S MEMORY OR SOMETHING? IN BETWEEN 20 WORDS YOU MAKE THE M.C. 4 Y.O. AND 6 Y.O. OR A TIER 1-5 TO 1-4. That's it as readers we can't expect anything from the Authors but at least don't make mistakes about your own story at least and the he/she him/her because it makes story really painfull to read, that's it good luck. 😊