It is good overall but has some problems. The mc is way to intense. When Sokka tries to leave and settle down, the mc shames him. The way the mc acts overall is a little cultish to be honest. Katara having feelings is justified since they've been on a journey for four years but you should have developed it better since the only romantic gestures for each other are these weird 'head pats'. I also dislike how you made Yue attracted to him almost instantly. The plot is also quite rushed and there have been no updates recently. 3/5
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