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DaoistUltraGamer
DaoistUltraGamerLv34yr
2020-08-11 22:17

The beginning of this fiction is pretty good overall and makes you feel like the protagonist is someone rational and capable of thinking about his actions, his relationship with the other characters progressed in a good pace until he arrived at the water tribe, from this point on he becomes a spoiled brat, threatening even the tribe chief, even though he came there to make allies, his actions simply doesn't make sense and he has not a drop of gratefulness towards the fact that they trained him. But the worst for me is how a girl falls in love with him to the point of goin to his bed after fucking 5 or 6 lines of dialogue. Cliche wuxia instant love, if you don't care about all of this, then perhaps you'll like this story, otherwise, this a critical flaw in terms of story telling that needs to be fixed as soon as possible. I won't say anything else, this a fanfic, probably written by a kid or someone who isn't putting a lot of effort into his writing so I don't expect him/her to care about this review or change anything, good luck author, I hope you can improve.

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