Review Detail of BBJ1111 in Hell's Consort

I’m sorry if I’m coming off as entitled and rude but I’m only expressing my opinion. Yes it’s your story and you’re free to do as you please with it I just hate how toxic you made the vampire if he was going to be the ml. He’s a terrible person and I just don’t understand why would you want Luna to be with that absolute abomination. He sucks, he’s insecure as f*ck, has 0 charm?aggressive?ignorant,violent, stuck up and just absolutely horrible. He even f*cking tortured her as punishment like wtf how f*cking twisted was that ravin never did anything like that. Even when he was in the vamp king’s body he never forced or tried to coerce her into giving up her virginity he respected her wishes to stay a virgin yet that bastard the vampire king would’ve done anything to f*ck her not giving af about what she wants, yet she chooses him 🙄 🤦‍♀️. I just don’t get how tf this guy is better than any of the arch demons yet dumb f*ck female lead Luna acts as if it’s all Ravin’s fault that her psychopath husband was heavily influenced by ravin like wtf does she know anyway she’s only been with him like in her lifetime and there time together wasn’t even that long. It just disappoints me how good this story could’ve been if you made the vampire king a better person or made her choose ravin instead.