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Katarina_Claes_
Katarina_Claes_Lv133yr
2021-06-22 17:48

I've been reading this for a while now (ch 510+) after leaving and coming back to it, but overall it's not bad. Ngl, there's juicy moments, but there's also a lot of fluff that outweighs the juice. Takes a long time for the author to get to the main point. It feels comparable to playing slots and waiting for a jackpot for when the story finally reaches climax.

Hell's Consort

Parisian_Moon
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984 Chs

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Parisian_Moon
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I am amazed by this review this is what I am actually feeling right now and you just put my thoughts into words. I just want it to get to the main point but I have to write stuff before it actually arrives there. And then the fluff, I'm dying and crying huhuhhuhuhuhhuhuhhuhuhu!!!!!!! I can't. I have underestimated myself. I noticed that readers who have a huge following write a lot of fluff on their stories so I ended up following that style. And now I didn't even notice that there is TOO MUCH OF THEM that it already outweighed the juice. Thanks for telling me this. Now I am aware. I will make the pace quick from now on!!!

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