Review Detail of Dingoa in The Strategist That Succeed With Gallant Power

I've only read a couple of chapters of this and skipped around a bit (so I can't really give a legit review about overall things like story development or character design), but from the little bit that I've read, I can tell that a lot of well-focused thought has been put into this. The systems at play are interesting, the names are really cool, and the author has nailed a specific mood (sort of a formal, alien mood - I'm not sure how to describe it, but I like it) with the type of language they use. It does take you somewhere else. I think the descriptions allow you to picture what's going on, as some others have said, and there's good detail. Seems like there's some good action in here, if you're looking for that, too, and some great war and fantasy elements. Plus, I find it cool that it switches points of view sometimes. Occasionally it's difficult to follow, but that may be due to the fact that there are many interesting things at play.