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I'll admit it, I'm usually not a fan of sappy romances. Yet - as a true testament to the author's ability - I actually enjoyed reading this. The synopsis makes it sound like a cliched love drama: y'know, girl meets boy, boy meets girl, and they live happily ever after. But it's not, it's surprisingly refreshing. The story has a sense of mystery, especially when it comes to the FL (Violet), but what really impressed me was the characters' developments. As the story is written from the FL and ML characters' perspectives, you can hear their thoughts, their emotions and it makes them all the human and third dimensional. Even better, Violet, despite having such a tragic childhood, isn't some meek damsel in distress. She's got guts and is feisty, though only when dealing with Luke. Like many authors, including me, there are a few grammatical errors, but that's just me nitpicking (I'm sorry author for all the corrections in the paragraph sentences, it's a habit for me to do that) and didn't derail the story at all. If you love romance or werewolves, then I'd refined this to you 100%. Even if you don't, I'd still recommend you try this and give it a shot

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Thanks for your review and the corrections!😂 I really appreciate it, as it will help me to fix the errors in my book. I am not really good in English, so the grammar kind of confuse me lol. I will fix it as how you told me to. Thanks!

Drakonous
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If you have a computer you can try Grammarly. That thing is the no.1 tool for writers, right next to the thesaurus and that's because it'll detect any spelling/grammatical errors and give suggestions to fix them. And if you download the Google Chrome extension then you can fix your chapters straight from inkstone

winterdaisy55:Thanks for your review and the corrections!😂 I really appreciate it, as it will help me to fix the errors in my book. I am not really good in English, so the grammar kind of confuse me lol. I will fix it as how you told me to. Thanks!