Review Detail of Yasashiki in One Piece: Another Chance (Completed)

My first reviews will be on this fanfic, because it is now finished I feel legitimate to review it. First of all, I have to say is that it was a really nice ride. I like how all the characters are depicted, the story itself is the mc being part of the straw hat so obviously all the events will be similar, some changes were made and for the better. I think I enjoyed the slice of life parts a lot more than the rest, the interaction within the crew is top notch. I would still say that the fight are not really the best you could find, it could be better. I can’t judge grammar and such because I’m not speaking english as my first language, but everything is understandable, maybe even getting better as the chapters goes. I hope to see your others work maybe on other anime/game/book !