Review Detail of Sliarcrat in One Piece: Another Chance (Completed)

Haaah, I don't even know what to say. I've read nine chapters and I'm sorry for wasting my time. Good thing I should've stopped after chapter one. I'll start in order. 1. Writing quality. The grammar itself isn't bad. I'd even bet 4/5, but there's one thing. And that's text styling. I don't know about others, but I felt very uncomfortable while reading. Dialogues, descriptions of the terrain, and so on just fit into one paragraph. You could just break them into separate paragraphs. Then it would have been much easier to read. So it's only 1/5. 2. Updating Stability. Everything's fine here. 3. Story Development, Character Design, and World Background. If I could, I'd give it 0/5. But alas, a minimum is 1/5. I'm not even going to split those three parts. It's screwed up in here. Starting with stupid desires ( Erase your memories because it'll be more fun? Spending your desire on appearances? Really?) and ending with "unexpected luck" (Finding the right world, lucky Devil Fruit appearance). And it' s only getting worse. Result: I don't recommend it to anyone. Do not waste your time and nerves.