Review Detail of LaikaMeer in I'm Into You (BL)

Damn.....Damn...Damn....I loved it absolutely...The novel is a complete HOOK ...like it keeps you hooked the entire time..The story plot is so amazing and especially the characters and their world settings are mind blowing...If you keep writing this story is gonna become really famous...MARK MY WORDS...The only thing you need to improve is your writing style and grammar and like due to the weak random flow of moments your scenes are poorly altered which makes it hard to understand what's going on by reading once...a little confusion there...BUT because your story's plot and hook is so amazing that mustn't be a problem rn .Overall I loved it...I am waiting for further updates,surely your writing will improve don't worry .Story has great potential and is really well-thought .Keep up the good work