Review Detail of Nicole_99 in Doomsday Survival System

There were minor punctuation and spelling errors here and there. Plotwise, the story is intriguing and fascinating. I love how you portrayed the MC as a character who prioritises his family's safety above himself. I hope he manages to survive and somehow protect those he holds dear in those trying time. *For punctuations, if you have already used "...?!" then there isn't much need to put a comma behind the sentence unless its a phrase or dialog. There were some errors as well where you used "your" instead of "you're". You're basically means you are... or something while your is used to symbolise something belongs to you. Same goes with the word "his" and "he's" that you wanted to use. This are just pointers for you, because I really enjoyed the story.