Sorry, owe you a review. The character building is not bad. Aside from Izumi's trashy attitude, I'm quite fine with others. By the way, the conversation taking throughout the whole story feels jarring, like it's coming from a drama instead of reading a novel. Also, you don't need to write 'To be continued' at the end. I hope you could really return a better review on mine instead of typing nice novel like a spam.
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