Review Detail of Pyris_Silver in I Would Still Love You

Interesting story so far, on the better side compared to other stories I have read. The characters are Interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing their relationships develop. There are some flaws here and there, but as the writing progressed I can see that the author is getting better. A way to improve the story would be paying more attention to descriptions and world building, though from what I can tell so far the focus is on charaters right now which is fine. World building is just one place the story is a lacking a bit, but overall this a story with great potential and I would definitely recommend giving it a read.