Review Detail of Awts_Sadge in To the Depth of Abyss

this novel has a lot of good potential, like literally.... the words and grammars might be too gronky but, its still understandable for me (which ive been reading a lot of indie novels and non-webnovel novels). has a good plot, what i really like in the mc's personality is hes a good guy, he do good with his bros(the bullies who literally trashed him), the bullies changed too so thats a nice story... but the other thing i dont like is how the mc deals with elisa...i know that mc will be greedy like a** but atleast make arsen(btw the name is quite cool) protect her and care for her.... also ive been noticing the grammar and writings are better in ch 55? or above.. thats great keep it up author 👌👍