Review Detail of amaturewriter in Journey of my Path[Moved]

just the reasons for me not giving u the last 1.2 stars -no moments of MC coming to terms with his power or training his power [now look, I like god like MC..always has requested that **** but here no training? nothing? one moment he SI'd, and the next he is fighting vali ] -Azazel just accepted MC like that...just believed MC's BS...dude, this is the most curious fker in DXD and he is a leader of a faction. No suspicion? nothing, Even after seeing MC's power? its rushed is my point -MC joining the fallen angels...the fallens are probably the most hated and without a doubt the weakest....joining em was useless. [ I would've liked this if it wasnt for the time MC SI'd ] -The time,,seeing as MC is age of the vali, this probably a couple months before cannon....so no time for exploration ?, follow cannon? [hopefully I'll be wrong and u'd fk cannon]. -First thing coming into DXD he does is fight vali. -And dude dosnt seem smart, cause of **** he did so far Look this is just a wish fullment FF, like an actual wish fullfillment That said, I did enjoy it, still the points mentioned above does not make it dope **: OP MC is nice..keep it like that