Review Detail of TheLazyDodo in Rise of the Dodo empire

This novel is interesting , if we forget about the grammatical errors that can be corrected in the future. The concept is very promising, it have the potential to be a good novel, but it will also be easy to become a complete mess. Good luck author, you will probably need it. Glory to the dodo empire! Now we will need to change the Lore of our clan, you know that, right? The original was funnier, dammn copyright... Fu***k off dinosaurs, where the hell is the zerg invasion?!