Review Detail of DNaCat_R in Rise of the Dodo empire

Shameless review from the author 🙃 Well... What to say, this is the first time that I try to write something and I don't know if someone is actually interested in reading what I'm writing but I will continue writing if someone like it or if I am bored... Probably the second option.. Ahm, if anyone leave a review, chapter comments or something, even criticism, I would really appreciate, so thanks you in advance for anyone that will waste some of his/her time to tell me what do you think about this novel and where I could improve myself for the future. [Besides... I suck writing in english, so forgive me for the multiple mistakes that I will surely do]