MC is so confusing. I can't understand what is wrong with her. Moreover, I felt like I was watching a toddler when I was reading. For a successful person, she is really stupid. Your writing is contrasting with one another. For a successful person, she must be strong-willed and decisive, no? But she was weak-willed and indecisive. What is more? She couldn't even use her advantages. I only have one word for her, trash.
YuuZu
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