A unique storyline and an interesting design for the main lead - I can tell that there's a lot going on just from reading the first few chapters. How each scene progresses is well-paced, and character interactions are fun to read. Writing quality still has a potential to be polished - though it doesn't make use of a lot of descriptive, I can still clearly picture what's happening. It's quite intriguing, actually. But be sure to take note of the punctuations, spellings and the arrangement of the body of text as well. The fluidity of the story depends a lot on the construction of the paragraphs after all 🙂 Overall, it's a one-of-a-kind read. Cheers to the author. Keep it up! ☺️
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