Review Detail of BRPever in GearKiller

Okay so it has been a while since I wrote a review, so take this one with a grain of salt. Some chaps felt short but since they covered the event well, it was fulfilling. The writing quality is good IMO. I am mostly saying that because the sentences are easy to understand. There seems to be a need for mid dialogue punctuations in some sentences, but this is an easy fix. No comments on the stability of updates: As someone who cares about quality more than quantity. But when I say so many chaps on 28th I was like :O The story development is somewhat fast with a lot of dialogues... But I like it since the characters are portrayed well. Now the interesting part here is the Character Design... The dialogues are set well making it easier to understand the characters. The world background part needs a bit of work here IMO... mostly because it's overshadowed by the dialogues in many chapters. But this mostly depends on how well one can imagine the surrounding. /me secretly screams GIMME MORE SCIENCE IN SCI_FI...