Over all this novel is really good. You explain every details finely but this is your biggest weakness. If you tried not to reveal about Vishu Incanate and his powers first you can make your story much appealing. Why? Because it will make the readers more enthusiastic to find out about the secrets and power of the MC. But the plot was really amazing and well made. Continue your work.
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