Interesting read with minimal issues when it comes to punctuation. The chapter titles were creative too. Three chapters so far, can't quite judge the story development but it seems straight to the point so no worries. Paragraphs are not that lengthy and the world background was described greatly. I was able to picture them in my mind. I wish you the very best!
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