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Rating: 4.4

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MokouFriedChickenLv33yrMokouFriedChicken

Good start. There are some spacing issues within the quotation marks and some lacking punctuations in some parts, but otherwise, not really a detriment to the reading experience. Story-wise, I can't really say much since there's only three chaps. But the descriptions are colorful and paints a good atmosphere. Keep on writing👍

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Lord_Meph1sto

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Lord_Meph1stoAuthorLord_Meph1sto

Yeah the spacing in pc and mobile are entirely different.I am currently trying to deal with it. I will try my best to improve

3yr

MokouFriedChickenLv3MokouFriedChicken

I get that. WN really has a lot of lacking Quality-of-Life features.

Lord_Meph1sto:Yeah the spacing in pc and mobile are entirely different.I am currently trying to deal with it. I will try my best to improve

3yr