Review Detail of BRPever in Prismatic Sovereign's Legacy
Review detail
Okay, here I am now after a lot of analysis. The writing can be understood... but don't try adding complex words just for the sake of it... be simple, concise, and go with the flow. The stability: don't push yourself... just go with the flow.... we need quality than quantity. The story development: NO COMPLAINTS HERE! all's good in this department. The character design: I think the MC's name is too long other than that we are cool. The world background: the world is well but the surroundings needs a little improvement. Like don't go around making puddles lol... Overall: A good read.
Prismatic Sovereign's Legacy
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Hello BRP as always this is such a wonderful message. I'm very well aware how it's a little fast paced but it was never my intention to compensate it with complexity of words. It's sole purpose is to describe the predicament of MC, and premise of the story. For the name, she's a woman who lived a long time ago. In real world, I bet it's even rarer to have Anasthasia as name for 21st century. But as promised, it's world-building, and bounded by intricate pacing. So bear with me as I continue to improve.