Review Detail of radashta in The Shadow of The Past

it has too few chapters for now and mostly we see the main character and can understand who she is and what she represents. if it's a romance story spicing things up can help liven the situation up to keep readers reading, people love romance and they love good romance even more. the author can do many things since the groundwork seems to be taking shape. I see some grammatical errors in each chapter, but that can be corrected. also, if the narrative goes in the third person it should be in the third person and if it jumps towards the first person it must be done carefully. a smooth transition is important good luck !!