I rly like this novel, got quite a few original takes, an original writing style, good character designs. what I was mostly surprised about is that the author seems to know his games, haven't rly seen any flaws that rubbed me the wrong way, which is pretty rare for a webnovel book, especially in the gaming genre. There are some lose ends in the story, development, world setting, but like I said no real flaws, it's gonna be the authors choice how he is gonna knot them up later. He also took up some other difficult approaches which shouldn't be easy to write flawlessly, but till now everything seems good. I,m really interested to see how this novel gonna develop. now... negative aspects, there aren't rly anything obvious, maybe the story progression is a little on the slower side. But something keeps constantly bugging me, the novel is rly amazing, but reading it is more like a relaxed read, it amazes me, but it doesn't make my blood boil, anticipate new chapters, burn with enthusiasm like some of the best reads of the hundreds I had. And I,m not quite sure where the problem lies. if it's the progression, or the battles, or the simple but on point writing style which makes it more relaxing. or maybe it's cuz the setting was a little vague and the happenings right now are all still mysterious and I couldn't build a connection yet. hmm... I think it's the last one. well let's see, I might update this in a few months :p good luck author, keep it up
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