Hai kak.. Aku yg dr fb. Good story, but the grammar mistakes make it hard to follow at points. World building is good, but also jumps a bit. Keep up the writing and keep working.
hartpeler
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haha. salken, yes. i had some grammar flaw that i'm trying to fix now. as story goes. i will fix it eventually, welcome aboard DMT fellow! :3