Overall it's a bit early to judge but, knowing the author and how he's getting better at writing, I'll give trust and review early. Quite everything is on a rate 5 for WN standards, the idea is original and the grammar isn't bad. I particularly love how the characters are interpreted and written though a character like Merlin is really difficult to write so I hope it will go good. The vote would be a 5, though for my ethics I never give a 5 on world building in ff so cinsider it a 5 and give it a try
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