[Reviewed on: 21-06-2021] GOOD POINTS: - Fast pace, accurate sprinkle of hooks - Smooth flow of the plot (as per in first 6 chaps) - Quality is highly readable (Believe me when I say that) - World background exists and shifts without making it confusing for readers - Imagining the descriptions and surroundings is not hard, author has made it possible effortlessly - Apparently MC is a restless soul, who wants to level up and grow by breaking his limits - He can make friends effortlessly, caring, observant yet optimistic character - He's not broke probably (not weak to strong in poverty aspect) but he lacks in power and privileges - Melia is suspicious, I repeat she is. Though her mysterious character and healing was itself a hook to read what she gave to him and why she instructed MC to visit her again WEAKNESS: - MC's development is kind of slow that It's not evident how he's reacting to the incidents - Nothing states his mental condition - No inner monologue is there to support his reactions - During the fight scene he is simply bewitched by the new girl, after going through a series of unusual events (Um...what?) There was no soliloquy to support his actions.

Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.

Don't mind me, this comment will just address some things. If the writing seems to get better further into the story, it's not intentional, but something that happened as I learned how to pace and write better with more experience. This is my first attempt at a novel or really any long writing piece. So I tried to be ambitious and attempt for a pretty big world with complex ideas, which is why in the beginning I might seem a little bit worse than my later writing. However, for people wondering, yes in my opinion my writing gets better the further you read, in terms of pacing and writing. Also, some of the info about the world isn't revealed in the beginning due to my mistakes. Since this was my first novel, I made some mistakes. I am currently writing a second novel, where the writing quality, plot, and other stuff are greatly improved. However a disclaimer, some important info is only explained further as you read. I do try to explain important info that I might have missed if you comment, but I beg you to bare with this author and continue reading for more explanation on some characteristics in this story. Please support your neighborhood author. (I am smoll author) I try to reply to as many comments as I can and answer any question to the best of my abilities, LOVE ALL YOU READERS.

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Quality of writing : excellent Stability : excellent Story : Wonderful World design: started off great and unique Overall very wonderful story. :)

This book has a vary good storyline and is weirdly addictive to read once you start you don’t want it to end. Each chapter has a decent lenth it is not to long or short.

It gave me a good sense of adventure! The story has a good plot, good characters, and most importantly... a spunky MC that suits them! Thank you author for writing this novel and I hope you keep on updating!

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The book was really interesting to read so far. I'm a big fan of adventure-style games and RPGs, and this book was very similar to them. I love the author's writing style, great job!