La trama general va bien, sin embargo aveces hay cosas poco comprensibles de vocabulario(yo uso traductor pero igual si esta bien escrito se traduce bien así que deberían haber algunas partes en el idioma original que están un poco torcidas?), hay ciertamente falta de detalle en general pero asumiendo que apenas vamos empezando supongo que es aceptable, bueno dejando eso de lado se bien espero por mas
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LIKEThe general plot goes well, however sometimes there are things that are not very understandable in terms of vocabulary (I use a translator but if it is well written it translates well so there should be some parts in the original language that are a bit crooked?), There is certainly a lack of detail in general but assuming that we are just starting I suppose that it is acceptable, well leaving that aside, I hope for more
Tropical_GameZ:Can you Google translate this please!
amaturewriter:The general plot goes well, however sometimes there are things that are not very understandable in terms of vocabulary (I use a translator but if it is well written it translates well so there should be some parts in the original language that are a bit crooked?), There is certainly a lack of detail in general but assuming that we are just starting I suppose that it is acceptable, well leaving that aside, I hope for moreimage