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2023-08-11 05:48

Great story ☺️.... but it's a paid story 😒.... Some character names switch with the other ones. Some small spelling mistakes are also in this but readable.

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Thank you for the review. It was my first story on this platform 3 years ago, that's why so many mistakes 😅. I've improved a lot...please try my new contemporary story- Sweet Marriage: My Husband is a BAD BOY. You'll enjoy that story more☺️

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