The story is well written, and quite entertaining, although the MC might seem a little clumsy in the beginning. But the Author has trouble putting the right articles, upholding a consistent sentence structure and narrative (it switches back and forth between first and third person, sometimes in the same sentence) so it can get a little irritating from time to time!
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