Review Detail of Tmii in Star Wars:Eternal
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Trash Star Wars fanfic idk how it’s ranked so high you got a system that controls the MC if he does any bad deeds revokes his system you know what happens after that what I don’t get is why make a Mc look so heavenly handsome but hides his face 24/7 “it bring too much attention” might as well make him ugly plus the Mc a retard with SS intelligence but I forgot can’t be smarter then the author right ? Plus it’s just follows usual plot pretty similar to other fanfics author also nerfs Mc a system is suppose to correct your flaws automatically an improve but forcing him to find a master so dumb An you can’t forget Anakin get on ya knees suck him off Mc this story not for me I was hoping for a more anti hero dark side but I found 💩💩💩
Star Wars:Eternal
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That’s a little harsh bud. The system itself does not control him he can do whatever he wants except you know be evil like doing rape or fucking inslaving innocent civilians and the MC doesn’t want to be evil either plus he can still do bad things like stealing which he has done and killing bad people and guess what it the MC chooses to hide his face because it is a lot of trouble imagine girls looking at you 24/7 which could cause some to become a yandere and imagine how many kidnapping and slavery attempts for his good looks he’ll have and don’t say that he can easily defeat them well guess what everyone has to sleep and they have force restricting collars and let me ask you would you want to be ugly let me answer for ya no you would not. Also the intelligence stat does not actually effect the smarts of a person by that much and just like how wisdom does not make you wiser because you can only gain true wisdom through experience, what intelligence does do is increase your learning capabilities and memorization, Also a system always has flaws they can not be perfect and the MC and still do it by himself but he is fast tracking it by getting a master while at the same time getting help for Naboo Then he is not metaphorically sucking off ani what he is doing is taking up a big brother role and helping him while also helping himself by furthering his agenda while also try to make sure that ani doesn’t go all darkside emo while from your profile picture I’m pretty sure your all ready emo and edgy enough. And guess what you didn’t find what your hoping for thats fine but guess what don’t go posting dumb **** edgy reviews because guess what this author is putting their heart and soul into their work and I’m not going to let you fucking **** on it so if you don’t like it don’t fucking say anything.
Agreed most of his reviews are like this. There is some truth to what he says but he ruins it by insulting.
Grass_Cutter:That’s a little harsh bud. The system itself does not control him he can do whatever he wants except you know be evil like doing rape or fucking inslaving innocent civilians and the MC doesn’t want to be evil either plus he can still do bad things like stealing which he has done and killing bad people and guess what it the MC chooses to hide his face because it is a lot of trouble imagine girls looking at you 24/7 which could cause some to become a yandere and imagine how many kidnapping and slavery attempts for his good looks he’ll have and don’t say that he can easily defeat them well guess what everyone has to sleep and they have force restricting collars and let me ask you would you want to be ugly let me answer for ya no you would not. Also the intelligence stat does not actually effect the smarts of a person by that much and just like how wisdom does not make you wiser because you can only gain true wisdom through experience, what intelligence does do is increase your learning capabilities and memorization, Also a system always has flaws they can not be perfect and the MC and still do it by himself but he is fast tracking it by getting a master while at the same time getting help for Naboo Then he is not metaphorically sucking off ani what he is doing is taking up a big brother role and helping him while also helping himself by furthering his agenda while also try to make sure that ani doesn’t go all darkside emo while from your profile picture I’m pretty sure your all ready emo and edgy enough. And guess what you didn’t find what your hoping for thats fine but guess what don’t go posting dumb **** edgy reviews because guess what this author is putting their heart and soul into their work and I’m not going to let you fucking **** on it so if you don’t like it don’t fucking say anything.