Review Detail of Lackofsense in Star Wars:Eternal

I only read to the first 20 chapters, it was good and I had my fun. The grammar is good and legible while some deeper meaning do appear here and there. It updates within a good rate, and there are times where you are left for more and would like a higher frequency but the word count is also at a satisfying amount. Within the first 20 chapters there not much story yet, the MC usually just follows the original plot so he can experience the actual world of Star Wars. So the character development is still developing as well. Not much to see about the MC yet, but it starts to fall flat at some chapters. While in other chapters you feel attach to the MC for his character. Is still unstable up to this point. The main character usually has everything planned out and expected things to go his way. Which does until chapter 20 where he gets toyed with the best in the field of politics. That’s actually a good thing because it shows that the Mc can lose sometimes. It’s actually pretty fun, however chapter 20 became an issue for me for other reasons I won’t spoil. The story is good and it will help you have some fun, there’s also some frustrating decisions the MC takes but it is what it is. Give it a try, to some it might be bland, to others interesting for awhile. Some it might be new while others cliche but still enjoyable. I stopped reading at chapter 20 out of personal taste, but that’s just my opinion which I won’t include I’ll be as non-biased as possible.