Review Detail of Enjoyteddy in Star Wars:Eternal
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So your grammar is not to bad way better then some stories on here. The story seems fun so far and I hope you update a lot. I also hope you continue to have fun writing.
Star Wars:Eternal
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thank you for the criticism and yes, I even saw how bad it looks. I will try to improve, even if I am doing it just for fun, I see no reason not to try to do it right. Try to understand that most grammatical errors come from the translator, so I have to revise in English, which although I understand, I am not fluent