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2021-04-06 20:45

Thank you once again autho. I finished reading both of your amazing works. SPOILER . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Okay, although I know the *** scenes make the novel interesting to read (especially for horny ones LOL) but I think there's just too many scenes. I would love if you focused more on a lot of conflicts or struggles. But yeah, I did love the story so I am giving you a 5-star! ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿป๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿป

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