Review Detail of Coconut_Head in 1453: Revival of Byzantium
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The story is very good and pretty I I triguing if you enjoy history. The one thing that repeatedly bothers me is the poor grammar. Many of the sentences are run on and use the wrong word tense or choice. A lot of the time your mind will be autocorrecting the chapters. However, the story and the characters are great and fully fleshed out. If the author decided to get an editor, I could see this novel being one of the top 15 on this site.
1453: Revival of Byzantium
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Coconut_Head:I truly enjoy reading your novel. As the chapters have gone on, it has gotten much better with a few minor mistakes. If you have the time, going through the early chapters will definitely benefit you in drawing in more readers.image
Coconut_HeadLv12Coconut_Head
I truly enjoy reading your novel. As the chapters have gone on, it has gotten much better with a few minor mistakes. If you have the time, going through the early chapters will definitely benefit you in drawing in more readers.
SaberFate:Thanks man :) I will improve on that