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the story is new for me. you know the setting and plot itself. I also like the imagery but i think that the more you write, the more you'll develop this particular skill. for me, the story still lacks the emotion but i also know that you will get better with it. language wise, i could clearly see that you have a command in using the english language. overall, i really love it. even for a novice like you. keep it up!